Rut #5- Brittan Weber
Wow. I like writing poetry, but for some reason writing a song was way hard for me. I now appreciate the great lyrics in songs I love so much more. And I feel like songs are always about love or relationships...but hey thats what we are all going through. haha
Back there
eyes on eyes
with no where to go
left behind all others
the fear to let go
(chorus)
I'm not there, you're somewhere
I'm somewhere, you're not here
Paradise lost in past years
we could go back there but we won't
The newfound mind
leaving each other behind
we would wait
but the fit isn't right
(chorus)
I'm not there, you're somewhere
I'm somewhere, you're not here
Paradise lost in past years
we could go back there but we won't
eyes from eyes, reflecting places we've been
and places separately we will go
Brittan,
ReplyDeleteThis line is SO pretty. Really, it evokes a lot of emotion in my opinion:
"we would wait
but the fit isn't right"
I love that.
steven
This is a beautiful song, good job on this one.
ReplyDeleteVery deep song, I like it! Good job!
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