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Thursday, February 14, 2013

Rut 5 Song Lyrics - Ashley Boehme

I liked this exercise.  I wrote a couple poems for my creative writing class last semester and this reminded me how much I enjoy writing and need to do it more.  It's kinda hard when you're writing to say what you're trying to say and not lose track.  Because it's so challenging, it's really rewarding when you get it right.  I don't think these lyrics are *perfect* yet, but here's what I got.
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Squishy boy
Wanna
pinch your cheeks.
Never
enough sleep for your baggy eyes

Swishy boy
crazy. Play my part
for me             
My brain's
reelin', can you figure us out?

You fix my techie stuff for me
your face is pretty funny
look sexy when you're serious
but I just make you smile

 Monkey boy,
clingy. Kissy face, silly
what's my deal,
I kinda like your home lunch life.

You fix my techie stuff for me
your face is pretty funny
look sexy in your classy clothes
but gym shorts are your style.

David with a J
will you hate me someday
do you still want me
if I'm a *&adf^, will you cry
will you run away

David with a J
you're my only mistake
want you—
tapered hands
grandpa feet
floppy hair

Tell me something
lazy boy
lying on the couch
you're pillows, blankies, chocolate
anime and mouths.
Kisses, oh you're good at them
will we ever be more than friends.

David
David
Oh

4 comments:

  1. I love the imagery. "tapered hands" "grandpa feet" "floppy hair"

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  2. Ditto what Brittan say. The description in your song is so funny.

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  3. This is such a fun song, even to read! Love it!

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  4. I loved this! You have a really unique style that comes through in your writing...I enjoyed reading yours because your writing style is so different from mine. I enjoyed it!

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