I am not a very musical person, at all. I can't sing to save my life, nor can I play anything besides the piano and poorly at that.
With that being said, my creativity for this song was going crazy and then it all stopped when I realized I had no tune for the words i was writing...Which then defeats the purpose of writing a song right? So I ended up with a song that I don't really know how it came about. In my head it's some rad swedish house music with a bunch of american cliches and random words. In real life, it's just a bunch of words that don't make any sense without the beat. I think it'd be great to have a song with just random American cliches in there. Id totally dance to it. Such cliches and words include:
An apple a day (beat beat beat) keeps the doctor away (beat beat beat) --Yeah that one is a good head bopper.
whatever
Mother knows best
like
Time flies
bye
This is a very solid song in my head. On paper, it's exponentially less cool.
Don't be so harsh on yourself. You have a good idea for a song. But if you think your song is lame, or going to be lame, it will be lame. There are a lot of songs out there with awful lyrics but they're still popular because they stick in your head. It's okay to have some "random" lyrics. A chorus will do the job of tying it all together and giving the song some unity. Finish the song.
ReplyDeleteI think your song turned out very cleaver. You could definitely see your sense of humor through the words which I love.
ReplyDeletelove the idea of using American cliches. like Katie said, it's very clever and would be so funny.
ReplyDeleteThis is so clever!! I like how short this is and I could totally see this working so well! Good job!
ReplyDeleteYou definitely could've gone a little further with it!! I enjoyed this and I think you could expand it a little more. :)
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