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Sunday, February 9, 2014

MARS


1st verse:
Tell me, who’s she, to be walkin’in and out of your life.
You haven’t, but lied, ‘bout your friendship’being cut with a knife.

Chorus:
We could go to space,
visit the stars
Wherever we go,
we can be together
from heaven to mars

2nd verse:
I’ve dreamed for a long time, how we’ve left ours for dead
I can tell you our journey is long but over. It can’t stop it, can’t stop now

2nd verse (hip-hoppity):
You say you don’t know why it’s called makin love
You say why they say they be falling in love
Break, our love break free many years ago
It’s time girl, we let ourselves just know

Chorus:
We could go to space,
visit the stars
Wherever we go,
we can be together
from heaven to mars

3rd verse:
Show me, she’s not yours, the stars do not align
I get lost in your mind, out of love and paradime

3rd verse (hip-hoppity)
Girl why you question livin in times of monotony
I wonder if you even know how to let me be free

Chorus:
We could go to space,
visit the stars
Wherever we go,
we can be together
from heaven to mars

I was really planning on putting these it to a song but I just couldn't find time to record one. I mean enough comments on here and maybe I'll put one together... I love thinking about writing lyrics but I learned it's pretty complicated! After listening some bands for inspiration, I found most lyrics seem effortless–or they are simple but may have some meaning. Most that I really like tell a story, but the middle of a story, and not the beginning or end. Sentences start from the middle rather than the beginning and have meaning but it's typically hard to reveal. I don't know, I liked it though. Hope you love my spacey futuristic love story.

2 comments:

  1. I find your song very intriguing, because it seems like it is a small snippet in the middle of a large, very emotional story. Perhaps you should not only put music to the lyrics, but expand it into a rock opera? Just a thought, if you have the time.

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  2. I'm not going to lie, I thought it was cool that your chorus went "between heaven and mars." It's something that's new, and I thought it was interesting. What made you choose Mars?

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